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The legs of these horses are much better formed / closer to true-to-life.
I'm completely happy with your addition of the second shaded area/neck muscle on each horse.
One thing that I want to mention that is just from my opinion is that you add some even darker shadows. The shadows you have are great for 3D feel but if this was mine I would add more intense areas within the already shaded parts. It could give it an even greater feeling of depth.
I think what I'm looking at suggesting for you this time is general body proportion information. I put this proportion chart up today with you in mind: [link]
Again, everything is looking very well formed.
Do you look at reference for each horse in all of your work? Don't only look at shapes while using those images, also look at what muscles you can see. Just like the addition of the neck muscle (well done there!) there are a few other lines/muscles you can add on this.
The only other thing is look at putting some defining shapes into the joint areas and the tendons in the lower legs.
Other than that I see massive progress!
One thing I noticed though is that the horses look a little big as in fat not that much you know and another thing is that their legs are pretty small but they arnt that small which dosn't matter...
I love the colors of their coats and the shading is good! I love the background a lot and they look like they are walking ON water, is it because the water is shallow because it looks awkward there but again thats creativity!
I love the expression on the horses face which makes me feel like they are alive XD
wellll great job!
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