| Fan Art / Cartoons & Comics / Digital / Books & Novels | ©2010-2013 =Valvador |
~ join Ice Horses community on facebook [link]



The storyline is based on Margit Sandemo's The Legend of the Ice People. You can buy the book or download first chapter for free HERE.
C8
I do say this is one of the best horse comics I have seen in a while.
Now to the real critique.
The backgrounds coooould be less blurry, but I do realize it is nighttime. So it would be difficult to see.
Nonetheless you could have some black trees and bushes in the background as well.
Add some shading to them and...
WHAPPOW.
Amazing background. >:3
I love your horses, but the snouts of the babies are a bit to long and narrow from what I have studied in horses.
That may be your style, but still, to me they are a tad bit too long.
Especially in the last panel, the bluey-purple young female's muzzle was a bit tooooo...
Narrow, per say.
I love it all!
Very detailed,
lovely plot,
I like how they are more human.
Say for the small blankets they wear and such.
An'ways, lovely work!
Keep it up, try not to blur the background so much,
and again, Keep it up!
The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork
Please sign up or login to post a critique.